Tryssa your writing is very good. I like the way you think outside of the box. You don't always copy others examples, in other words you often think for yourself. This sets you apart, as we are all unique. Keep up the good work!
When youi brought this home, I wanted peppermint patties. Now reading this again, I want peppermint patties!! It looks like you have been very persuasive. Good job!
Write something about yourself. No need to be fancy, just an overview.